#1
This is my first song writing lyrics and singing so I'd really like to hear some honest opinions, crit for crit of course. The recording is pretty sloppy, I just wanted to know what people would think of the song.

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"White Lady"
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#2
This is a nice laid back tune, i could imagine this just playing while im chillin on the lawn on a summer day.
really nice lead break in the middle there. I think the back ups with the FXs at the end of that could be a toned down a bit. aswell with the lead at the end.
I think just alittle more time on the recording and mixing and you'd have yourself a really lazy sunday afternoon.

For a first song with lyrics and vocals its really good. keep it up for sure.


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