#1
Hey yeah I just got dumped the other day and kinda wrote these lyrics at the moment so i was wondering what you guys thought ?

I gave my heart to you
but you said we were through
is life is worth living without you
it was the end of something new

i know your sorry but i love you
i thought what we had was true
cause i cant go on without you
when you tore my heart in two

all i have is a broken heart and glue
but i hate to admit that i still love you
after all I've gone through i don't know what to do
you blame it on me i blame it on you

i know your sorry but i love you
i thought what we had was true
cause i cant go on without you
when you tore my heart in two

i know its over
i know its over
but to be true
i love you
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#3
Well it's a nice effort, but I can see just about every love ballad cliche in there, mate.
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#4
lol yeah at the time they seemed good now looking back at them there a bit soppy. Since i usually listen to metal and i think i also mention you a bit too much
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You raped someone with a knife, didn't you?