#1
I dont use guitar pro or anything like that so I can only post tab it or midi file.


This is my first time posting in this section but uh... go easy on me? haha.


I have this problem when I make stuff that I can never finish it.

Also the intro for it isn't the real "intro" I didn't like the one I had before so I got rid of it.

It's really short since it isn't completed at all far from it. I just wanted crit on it so far.

btw im a noob at writing stuff been only playing for about a year and 6 months still suck at writing :/ I need help to get better at it.
Attachments:
metalcoreriff.zip
GEAR:
Schecter C-1 Plus (Emg 81/85)
ESP/LTD Viper 400
Bugera 6262 Head
Marshall 1960A Cab
Bad Monkey OD
ISP Decimator
#2
its really not bad at all. I like the breakdown and the riff after that.
You could easily make that into a song.
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470
#3
Quote by FlyingPooooo
its really not bad at all. I like the breakdown and the riff after that.
You could easily make that into a song.



problem is i'm terrible at finishing stuff.

I'll have like 3 good ideas and then after that it goes blank.

Any suggestions or something?
GEAR:
Schecter C-1 Plus (Emg 81/85)
ESP/LTD Viper 400
Bugera 6262 Head
Marshall 1960A Cab
Bad Monkey OD
ISP Decimator
#4
Maybe a chorus type riff. Simple four chord rythm with a looping guitar thing. Do a breakdown, go back into the intro riff and end it. =D

Crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=875390
-Gear-
Mesa Triple Rectifier---Bogner/Line6 SpiderValve---Orange PPC 4x12

-Pedalboard/Rackmount-
Alesis MidiVerb4--BBE SonicMaximizer 442--Ibanez TS9
Boss DD-3--Morley Mark Tremonti Wah

-Guitars-
Ibanez ART-100
Ibanez S-470