#1
Hey, this is a fun little song I wrote. Its called "Come Home." Wrote it on the spot, one take, didnt bother to mix it. Lemme know what you think? Is it worth fixing up? C4C.

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If you want to jam in/around Mooresville NC message me.
Last edited by 812many at Jun 3, 2008,
#2
Hey, (bump) some crits here would be nice, it would be cool if i got your opinions on if this song is worth fixing up a bit or not. and like i said, C4C. Thanks!
If you want to jam in/around Mooresville NC message me.
#3
I don't know man, I did listen to this yesterday...

I think the lyrics could use some crit over @ the lyrics forum maybe.

The guitar part is pretty cool, but not cool enough to get away without some interesting white-stripes-y lyrics.
If I did it, this is how I did it.
#4
Actually, that breakdown @ 2:1x is pretty cool
If I did it, this is how I did it.