#2
Great into composition!

I'd fatten it up with a distant echo maybe.

I could really feel a bass line begging to come in there when the intro progression repeated itself the first time.

Maybe the tempo change was a little forced @ 2:30 (or could be practiced a little)


I like the breakdown @ 3:00ish, but the off-key notes didn't quite pull it off imho.


All in all, I could really see someone putting some White Stripes-ish vocals over this and selling a few records!
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#3
That would sound awesome with a nice little bass line behind it.

I think the tempo shifts are a bit abrupt, though. It does have a nice salsa like swing to it.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=876144 C4C?