#1
This one is a bit different, compared to my other pieces. The punctuation is far more complex, and so is the composition of the verses. C4C of course, leave link. Please leave all your thoughts/ideas

I opened my eyes,
but then I was kissing you
With eyes wide shut.
It was perfection
on its purest form.
But you lips were losing touch,
and I didn’t feel the taste
of your saliva no more.
Was I really walking
backwards to faultlessness?
Were you floating away
like an illusionary pet?

As I was staring to get
the panoramic view
of this worst case scenario,
I saw you were wearing
a white dress with green
circles. It was awful.
But in you, it’s flawless.

But what I couldn’t get…
Why were you motionless?
Why did you stand there?
You could have run back
to me, but you didn’t react.
Your perfection turned to
lifelessness; senselessness.

I was so focused on you
that I didn’t get to notice
the beach at my right;
some seagulls flying around us,
and some resting in the sand.
All this tranquillity didn’t fit
the stage-setting of awkwardness
on this peculiar moment of ours.

You were turning into a black
silhouette; a shadow.
I couldn’t see your awful dress
no more. I couldn’t even look
into your shallow eyes.
Not even could I tell
if I was running in slow motion,
or walking at regular speed.

I was tasteless.
I couldn’t feel the greyed-grained
path I was moving on.
All I got to see was your stilt
image fading away with the distance,
until being left with the nothingness.

While flashbacking random moments,
I felt a ray of light perforating my torso
and my soul being sucked.

I was asleep, once again…