#1
So I'm working on some music, people say I'm a good guitarist. But the thing is I'm not a great composer. So I made these two short instrumental songs, to get some advice on what to improve. Because I've seen some of your guys/girls work here and some of you are amazing at it. I plan on getting vocal in my music, but I just had a root canal and don't feel like talking much for a few weeks lol.

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Thanks.
Last edited by Duhduhdadanny at Jun 4, 2008,
#2
dude it just sounds like you just tuned or are in the process of tuning your guitar and are picking and strumming random chords
It's Cadillac rainbows and lots of spaghetti
And I love meatballs so you better be ready
#3
work on creating one note melodies and then expand those melodies into chords or add chords underneath them