#1
well I don't think its that good and its in progress but tell me whatcha think

sunrise sunset


Is this the girl I buried
is the little boy at play?


I remember goin into town
that one fateful day

She used to be so beautiful
Her vibrant eyes were full of life


it was just about yesterday they found her in the river
Her throat slit with with a knife


Sunrise, sunset
Sunrise, sunset
Swiftly flowed her blood
I left her mangled body just a-layin in the mud


She looked so natural laying there
Just like a corpse should be


Is this the girl I buried
is the little boy at play?
#2
sounds way too much like the stuff from fidler on the roof lol. i'll come back to this one.
there are many here among us, who feel that l i f e is

but a [B]joke[/B]. but you and i have been through that, and this is not our [size="1"]fate[/SIZE].