#1
Song i wrote for my band

Global Warming Killed My Mom and Dad (and Violated My Sister)

So where’d you say you were again?
Follow the lipstick down your abdomen
See if the red spells out were just friends
So buddy where’d you say you were again?

If I decide to buy this neck tie
I can strangle you in a classy matter
But if I try and you don’t die
Just keep it, it matches your sweater

Did you say we jumped without a parachute?
Why that is just absurd
Your praying the ground stops getting closer
I’m flapping like a bird

You cut her down
And then you pay her rent
So tells me where’s the climax?
Tell me what I miss
I said you end her life
And then you pay her rent
So tells me where’s the exit
Am I making sense?

Surrounded by wires
Surrounded by questions
Id give you the solution but then there’s no purpose
I didn’t invite you over
You invited yourself
Could you try for me please just to show up announced?

Step inside
Lets talk about the weather
Let me go get this tie ive got
It goes with your sweater…
Last edited by Segataritendo at Jun 5, 2008,
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Global Warming Killed My Mom and Dad (and Violated my Sister)

Song i wrote for my band

Global Warming Killed My Mom and Dad (and Violated My Sister)

So where’d you say you were again?
Follow the lipstick down your abdomen
See if the red spells out were just friends
So buddy where’d you say you were again?

If I decide to buy this neck tie
I can strangle you in a classy matter (Shouldn’t this be “manner”?)
But if I try and you don’t die
Just keep it, it matches your sweater
(So far I love it. Very Catchy and nonchalant)

Did you say we jumped without a parachute?
Why that is just absurd
Your praying the ground stops getting closer
I’m flapping like a bird

You cut her down
And then you pay her rent
So tells me where’s the climax? (So “tell” me where’s the climax? Perhaps?)
Tell me what I miss
I said you end her life
And then you pay her rent
So tells me where’s the exit (Again, why “tells” instead of tell?)
Am I making sense?

Surrounded by wires
Surrounded by questions
Id give you the solution but then there’s no purpose
I didn’t invite you over
You invited yourself
Could you try for me please just to show up announced?

Step inside
Lets talk about the weather
Let me go get this tie ive got
It goes with your sweater…
(I love the ending)


I love the song! I could really only crit you on some spellings that you probably intended and I am not really sure how the title fits into the song. (I still like the title) I really like songs open to interpretation as it usually adds to its likeability and longevity. If you get a chance please crit mine called “Totalitarian”