Here is another death metal song by me, I think this one might be my best death metal song as far as riffs go. I might add a solo in it somewhere.
Last edited by Pingis_Or_Death at Jun 5, 2008,
The only thing I found was that the riff 29-36, I really don't like that rest at the end. It just breaks the song. But, if there was some extremely brutal grunt right there, I'm sure it'd all be good. lol

Also, the drums drove me insane for most of the song.

But that's all I could find wrong with it. lol

Good job. =)