#2
Not too bad, gets a little off timing at times, a little sloppy it seems but its pretty good. I like it.
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#3
I only listened 40 seconds into the first song.
It gets off timing a lot, it seems, like you should have done the lead differently. Not so sure about the vocals. I like the rhythm though, its really nice.
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