#1
Check it out guys. Wrote it in about 5 minutes.. It's been a while since I posted anything but I really enjoy this one, getting better. Tell me what you think!

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Loss of feeling
Loss of mind
Loss of healing
Left behind
Loss of temper
Loss of life
Loss of friendship
Left behind

Take my emptiness
Throw it back
Hack your feelings
A stealth attack
Feel the hunger for someone to love
Feel the hunger while you starve
Let me go
No more pain for me
Misery just let me be
Sick of you should be sick of me
Let me go
Just set me free!

Loss of feeling
Loss of mind
Loss of healing
Left behind
Loss of temper
Loss of life
Loss of friendship
Left behind

Take my emptiness
Throw it back
Hack your feelings
A stealth attack
Feel the hunger for someone to love
Feel the hunger while you starve
Let me go
No more pain for me
Misery just let me be
Sick of you should be sick of me
Let me go
Just set me free!
#2
awesome dude.
it reminds me a bit of disturbed,
lol
it flowed nicley
the "Sick of you should be sick of me"
remeinded me a bit of how MCR uses thier lyrics
i like it.
The repition of the 2 stanzas is ok for me.
although anwser this.
is this supposed to be a fast or slow song?
#3
It's a mid pace song. It's heavy but I make the lyrics flow nicely. I don't do screamo or anything like that, just singing.