#1
Hey, guys. I just recorded a new original song called My Chemical Dependency. It's at www.myspace.com/tyricemusic and it's called My Chemical Dependency. As always, crit for crit!

here are the lyrics:

I ain't got no chemical dependency
But I think I'm gonna get one, now
To finally have something in my life
That won't let me down
Cause I've been desperate for some company
But there's none of that around
So I'm gonna spend my nights at the bars
With the lost and found

So pour me a shot of whatever you've got
That can take me to a place where I am not
Tonight
Tonight

All things must pass eventually
This has got to end somewhere
Is what the people tell you
When they all pretend to care
But if that is the case for me
And time's gonna heal these wounds
Then I hope time
Catches up with me soon

And gives me a shot of whatever he's got
That can take me to a place where I am not
Tonight
Tonight
Banging on a trash can
Drumming on a street light
#2
free crit= it's good. the voice (no offense) is kind of hard to listen to, but it's good after the first 30 seconds. the lyrics are good, and the dark-kinda-western theme is good. 7.5/10
#3
shave the "my" off the title, i cant help thinkin bout MCR
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#5
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free crit= it's good. the voice (no offense) is kind of hard to listen to, but it's good after the first 30 seconds. the lyrics are good, and the dark-kinda-western theme is good. 7.5/10

No offense taken. That's why I started this thread--to get peoples' opinions.

Quote by CaptainJack666
shave the "my" off the title, i cant help thinkin bout MCR

Yeah, that was done on purpose. It's kind of an inside joke between a friend and me.
Banging on a trash can
Drumming on a street light
#6
hey i really like it!!

is that a synth sound that gives the nice melody line? or maybe a single note flow on guitar?
that melody whatever it is, i love it! kinda like Mosquito song by queens of the stone age (just that melody line)


gosh im rambling.

i also listened to selfish girl, the part that plays at about 1:50 is really good, adds an extra spice to the song.

please crit mine......https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=877153
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