sorry about the long wait at the beginning but PLEASE watch/hear it!!!

just drop a comment here or on youtube! please! i wanna know what everyone thinks!
this is like 2 of the only things i could ever come up with that i like, so please drop a comment, if you dont have a youtube account then drop it here! thanks!!!

i like it, kindof latin-ish put a band behind that and it could make a pretty nice song.

crit mine please, its in my sig
It's pretty cool I see a few things that I would personally do with it but that is just me.