#1
I dont really know why or how I wrote this, so I'm not expecting too much, but I thought it was kinda interesting so... here it is.

Fix me
Change me
Rearrange me
Oh, estranged me
Take this blade and
Change me
For better or ....
Heal me
Or deal me
One swift and final blow
To gates beyond
And better days
Final days
Ending days
With arms wide open
I fall
Into you
Into your soul
Your being
Your heart
Your ghost
My love
We are one
At last
We are one
My love
The feeling I express now
Is, unexplainable
Almost unattainable
Who knew my death would bring such happyness
Over me
Over my body
Mind and soul
You cry
And I miss you
But you will join me again
When you pass
We will meet
At these golden gates
Of the afterlife
Reunite
One last time


Thanks for reading!
Last edited by Take This Life at Jun 19, 2008,
#2
Quote by Take This Life
I dont really know why or how I wrote this, so I'm not expecting too much, but I thought it was kinda interesting so... here it is.

Fix me
Change me
Rearrange me
Oh, estranged me
Take this knife and
Change me
For better or worse
Heal me
Or deal me
This swift final blow
To gates beyond
And better days
Ending days
With arms wide open
I fall
Into you
Into your soul
Your being
your ghost
My love
We are one
At last
We are one
My love

[The feeling I express now
Is, unexplainable] (i like this, it is teh awesome?)

Almost unattainable( I like this, it flows reall well with what you just said)
Who knew my death would bring such happyness
Over me
Over my body
Mind and soul
I miss you
But you will join me again
When you pass
{We will meet
At these golden gates
Of the afterlife
Reunite
One last time} ( Touching, great ending. i like how you ended this)

Im not completely satisfied with all of the lyrics so please suggest improvements if you wish to. Thanks for reading!


Mind criting mine?
in sig.
You Are Being Used.
thanks.
#3
Fix me
Change me
Rearrange me
Oh, estranged me
Take this blade and
Change me


my favorite part.
RAWR Means I Love You In Dino