#1
Hey guys, I've recently recorded this song, I intended to put vocals into the song, but I don't have suitable lyrics yet..do have a listen and crit this song, and my other songs too, thanks. it's in my profile
#2
OK song.

vocals are going to help.

one of the riffs sounds like the timing is a little awkward (i.e. rushed) towards the end of it.

did you have a solo? I was a little distracted so I'm not sure, but that could also help.