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ok we my band is pretty soon auditioning singers (hopefully lol) and we figured we would complete our songs with lyrics, so i wrote some for a song but im not sure if people would like them, please give me your opinions and advice o what i shud change and how i shud change it, the song is called :reakms of imagination (the one on our myspace in my sig is only intro and very bad quality)

The DefROCKed Nuns - The Realms Of Imagination Lyrics

- Intro
-Bridge
- Verses :

I don't know why our situation
isn't getting any better
It seems to me that we have changed our ways
Life just seems to be different nowadays

Why do all good things eventually end up dying out
everything seems ruined without a single doubt

Chorus: (same chords as intro)

The only place where things seem right to you
where everything you goes the way you want
is inside your imagination.

The Realms Of Imagination
Seem difficult to find
But you can find them if you search
Deep inside your mind

Verses:

You imagine and dream
about things that you desire
but when you wake up
reality is not as you want it to be

soon you'll have to see
there's more to reality
then meets the eye

Chorus: (same chords as intro)

Even if your imagination
seems to be running wild
It has its limits
that you have to respect

The Realms Of Imagination
Seem difficult to find
But you can find them if you search
Deep inside your mind

The Realms Of Imagination (x5 fading out)
Pause and Then Solo
Outro (chords)


help would be greatly apreciated.