um, im kinda new at this songwriting stuff so um...i jus wanted to know if these lyrics sounded alrite....

chorus -
i want to hold you like the worlds going to end
i want to live my life with you by my side
i want to look into your eyes & they say love me forever
i want to tell you ill love u forever
but love is an understatement

when i see you shivers run up my spine
your eyes draw me in and never let me go
smile of yours will brighten any place
hearing your voice gets me through the day


one day without you is to much to bare
your love is all that ill ever need
i dont ever want to leave without you
my love for you i cannot describe


i want to be with you forever
to hold in my arms
to look into your eyes
and tell you how much i love you.
Yes, Im Totally Limpin with the Bizkit
Last edited by Another Name at Jun 7, 2008,