#1
crit is welcomed

Rip it apart
And put back the pieces
A standing of order
A method of leasing
Inside you shall lie
Aside a hail of concrete
Inside this sphere ill reside
Till i'm put back to sleep

Bring the stone to my bone
Bring the stone

I once was a free man
Only ruled by promise
now when I answer
i’m nailed across it
Watch me as I search for my saviour in the sky
Then as i’m beat down, i’m broken and i’m left there to die

Bring the stone to my bone
Bring the stone
#2
*reported*
Read the S&L board rules, only one thread with your work in a day.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!