#2
your voice is a bit shaky, and a little to jerky in the chorus. it was decent.
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#5
Yeah, it's lovely but you really need to practice your voice. You have a great clear way of singing when you're just singing a mid-range note, but start to shake and lose your breath/go out of tune when you're doing much else, you wobble in phrases and can't hit the highs.

Just sing, sing, sing and practice scales and that, get your voice stronger and that'll be ruddy perfect. I think you have a great starting point with your voice it just needs practice.
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