#1
This is a song from my emo/pop-punk bands back catalogue, I decided to break away from the distorted guitars and layer up a much more atmospheric track, I know it goes out of time at the slower part, other than that let me know what you think could be improved.

It's on my profile

C4C as always people! leave a link.
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#2
Very nice chord progression. I especially liked the interlude. If I had to choose one thing to make this song better, it would be to make the acoustic louder. Great job nonetheless!
#3
Hahaha, well if it passed for an acoustic i'm pretty happy, I actually just recorded using the line in to the mixer from my guitar electric and mic'd up the strings to get string noise then panned it extreme left and extreme right.
Too much gain = Ears in pain
#4
Quote by Nic Play Guitar
Hahaha, well if it passed for an acoustic i'm pretty happy, I actually just recorded using the line in to the mixer from my guitar electric and mic'd up the strings to get string noise then panned it extreme left and extreme right.
Wow, I seriously thought it was an acoustic. I guess it was the string noise that threw me off. Great sounding, though.
#5
I enjoyed listening to it. although i felt that the vocals felt a little off with the lead guitar. As the vocals are gentle and the guitar had a bluesy notes going on making it more raw. If i was you i would slow down the phrasing of the guitar, so it will give more attention to the lyrics. All 'n all, It was still a nice little jam.
#6
Watch the ends of phrases on the vocals, they seem to cut off too suddenly.

Also, I feel like while it is a good progression, the bass line needs to use different notes in the chords to make it more stepwise.

Otherwise, it sounds really good.


https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=880257

Thanks in advance.
"If faith is the answer we've already reached it
and if spirits a sign, then it's only a matter of time"
#7
i like the song i think u can improve it by turning up the vocals and and trying to make the vocals more clear other than that, this is a great song.

can u take a look at my recording its my first recording, tell me what u think in my thread
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=880281

the song is located at
http://www.myspace.com/rocksab

thanks and keep up the good work
#8
Thanks for the comment, I did what you said with the guitar and it helped a lot. I also changed the EQ on the bass and piano, and did a little bit of mixing, if you would like to hear the new version it's on my profile.
"If faith is the answer we've already reached it
and if spirits a sign, then it's only a matter of time"