#1
Hey, I just uploaded a instrumental called "Insomnia" onto my profile, i would so VERY grateful to get some critiquing. It's for bass, guitar, piano, and Fight Club DVD.
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#2
Really good, I like the Fight Club samples, great film...

Think about bringing the bass up? or making the piano sound a bit thicker.

Also I think the guitar could benefit from being double tracked with a cleaner tone, just keep it really quiet and pan it heavily to a side... it should give it a much nicer tone.

Great work though. and thanks for the Crit on mine.
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