hey man, i listened to your songs
-i liked 3am more i think, and in both of them the guitar playing is really good but the vocals are kind of lacking. i have a hard time hearing what you're saying and though i think you're on key i think you might want to work on your tone some. i have a lot of the same issues i think. something i would try if i were you is recording the vocals and guitar seperately so you could focus on each of them more, you'd get a better recording that way, even if you just use a crappy mic.

hey if you want, check out my songs at www.myspace.com/brianlawmusic
there's a c4c thread of them around somewhere