My goal in writing this song was to take a simple, common chord progression, and turn it into a creative sound. I'm planning on expanding the intro into something more satisfying, but at this point, I only threw it in there to set up the rest of the song. In order for my band to perform this, I need to write an additional horns line as well (we have a saxophone player and a trumpet player), similar to my previous punk song. I am not sure how I am going to approach the horns at the moment. In the meantime, tell me what you think of the song at this stage.