#1
Take 1 for a song idea me and my friends are making. I did the all the guitar work and guitar composition. Solo was improvised on top of the rhythm. Thats how I always come up with songs. The rhythm was not improvised but the riffs were based on an improv i did last time. My singer is writing lyrics.

What do you guys think. Would it suit with lyrics, and better solo placement.

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#2
Pretty good, only thing i have for ya, is just let that solo rip. Crank up the volume on that track so it just screams over everything
#3
Quote by supe18
Pretty good, only thing i have for ya, is just let that solo rip. Crank up the volume on that track so it just screams over everything

+1


but i must say this is in the wrong forum.


I like the way it sounds. very cool.


(but still in the wrong forum)

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#4
holy clippage and fuzz.

Solo was cool, riffs were too repetetive. Liked the whammy at the start tho, very mick mars.
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#6
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I was gonna do that, but my singer is like, "its already too loud, I want to be able to still hear the acoustic"

did you not read the loading screen on guitar hero III? "never leave your lead singer in charge of the mix." this holds true here.

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#7
it's good, i like the ideas
sounds a lot like Orion by Metallica after the distortion kicks in
also, maybe try to throw some screams a la Dimebag in the whammy section
and during the developement section, some harmonies might give it a really good boost

overall, it's definately a start, and especially starts to shine when the solo kicks in
#8
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did you not read the loading screen on guitar hero III? "never leave your lead singer in charge of the mix." this holds true here.



lol. Thats awesome. It reminds me of this joke thats says "and sitting were three musicians and a drummer"
#9
Quote by nyandres
lol. Thats awesome. It reminds me of this joke thats says "and sitting were three musicians and a drummer"


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#10
the riff that you start off with, its nice, but you should try to like make a little faster or gallop like, change the pattern. nice solo. honestly i dont think you need any lyrics, if you put the acoustic stuff in their more, it would be prefect, its a great song already. making the acoustic ending longer, just a tad.
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#11
too repetitive.

it's not bad, dont get me wrong, and I'm surely not trying to make you feel bad, but this sort of a song is not going to separate you from any other knockoff.

and surely blast that solo over all, forget what your vocalist says...its your solo, tell him to stay out of it.
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