Thats a nice song, only crit would be that the vocals need to be stronger and more pronounced.
Apart from that its cool
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Ah very good point. Charlie__flynn, you've out smarted me


crit4crit on 'acoustic 1 (with piano)' here

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It is a really nice song, and I'm really digging the harmonica - however fitting to the style it might be.

I disagree with charlie about the vocals though. For some reason I would like to hear them more relaxed and loose, rather than stronger.
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the guy who was louder in my right ear was a lot better, (i dont know how else to explain that haha)
and the guitar was too up-tempo for the song,
i kind of liked it though =]