#4
yes this is really Slayer like only its the good slayer. it reminded me of "Seasons in the Abyss).

BUT...

I think you should add some variation is the middle. it sorta seems abit samey. maybe a thrash breakdown. also. your time signatures are really messed up. im goona up load an idea in a sec. im just doing it now.
#7
the 4th bar.. i hate midi
beautiful intro. :]
sometimes it's a bit generic but i liked it, even if i cant play that.
i liked that song, so i got no constructive ideas to improve or whatever.

get that ****ing guitar pro and add drums.
go for it, sucker!


mind to crit my song?
choose one. <3