#1
Please crit?

I love elliott smith and this song is my favorite

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#2
Not bad.

I thought it was faster than the original, I dunno if that was something you were going for. And you seemed to struggle when singing the high notes in the chorus.

Other than that, it seemed pretty good. Perhaps trying throwing in some small riffs like Elliott used to do? You might have done that already, but it was rather quiet and hard to hear lol.

Well done anyway, get some more Elliott songs on, and I'll have a listen to 2.45am.
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#3
It was interesting to hear a stripped down version of it and I think you pulled it off pretty well. Remember what I said last time and when you sing, always try and picture the note a moment before you sing it. Also, do you record guitar + vox seperately? If not, you might notice a huge improvement when just concentrating on one musical aspect at a time. Cheers!
#5
Elliott Smith is super tough to cover. You did an alright job. Watch out for the high notes I can tell they are straining your voice. You should think of investing in a better mic.

Keep it up man, Elliott For Ever.
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#6
Thank you guys.
PitLurker, i tried your advice and if you cant tell, i sang a lot better this time, thank you.
I will keep trying your advice.

Hellbent,
Yea the igh pitches arnt my best thing, but i will keep working, thank you
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He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
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Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
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#8
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Thank you guys.
PitLurker, i tried your advice and if you cant tell, i sang a lot better this time, thank you.
I will keep trying your advice.


I appreciate it, and I noticed. Good work What are you doing next?
#9
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I appreciate it, and I noticed. Good work What are you doing next?

I was thinking of doing Whatever (Folk Song In C) next.

then after you keep giving me helpful hints about my singing, i shall try Say Yes someday.

ANd to guy above PitLurker, thank you and yes i will crit
Call me Sean
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
He's just trying to protect our innocence.


Yes i am
Quote by :Vicious--

Your flirting powers are incredible.



Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper