#1
Here is an intro and riff in a Dimmu Borgir symphonic kind of style, give me any crit you have or a direction you think it could take
Thanks
C4C
Attachments:
Metal Riff.zip
#2
All right, I'm really the evil keys in the back, mixing over the guitar sounds really great.

It sounded like a lot of noise, but it was truly haunting, beautiful noise.

10/10

R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#3
haha thanks a lot thats the vibe i was going for, obviously it sounds less like noise played on actual instruments lol and keep putting your stuff up because im really liking what you do
#4
Well, if you're talking about the song that was in Drop-A that's a one time thing, I write more along the lines of melodic death metal/prog metal-rock.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#5
yeah i was talking about the drop A thing, but if your death metal stuff is as good as that im excited haha
#6
Yeah, I just put a more melodic proggy thing, I dunno if it's your style, but check it out.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#7
Whoa, that's pretty cool. At first I wasn't so sure about the first part but when the distortion came in was class. Very excellent riffage, and the little melodic bit at the very end sounds like it could make a good transition.

Keep it up, I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.


#11
Very dark, very epic. Especially when everything comes in.

I kind of feel that there could be a little more structure to the riffs though. It feels a little random to me. They're all great riffs, but they're changing faster than I can absorb the sound and feel of them.