#1
Simply put, kind of repetitive, and it's technically two songs.

The first song is just an intro, then there is an open space that leads to the second song.

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Melodic - Open D.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#2
i like it, it is kind of repititive but its very melodic and beautiful in a way
8.5/10 on what you have so far
#3
very repetive. although that makes the chorus sweeter. which again is too long. which makes the next short part unexpected. nothing special.
the next part however, is great. it is crying out for some floaty vocals, soft drums, bass, and perhaps a lead guitar
great
'If I were not a physicist, I would probably be a musician. I often think in music. I live my daydreams in music. I see my life in terms of music.' Albert Einstein
#4
Quote by Jake the Peg
very repetive. although that makes the chorus sweeter. which again is too long. which makes the next short part unexpected. nothing special.
the next part however, is great. it is crying out for some floaty vocals, soft drums, bass, and perhaps a lead guitar
great


Good, you actually got the point that this is a mainly vocal-driven song.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory