#1
I think it's prog metal anyways, I'm not too sure. It's kind of like Opeth and Porcupine Tree had a baby with Emperor. So yeah. Here it is.

I called it teh chill song of doom because it originally started off really soft and stuff, as you'll hear if you listen to it. It eventually escalated into a heavy song, but not before I'd named it teh chill song of doom. Anyways, I'll crit for crit, so yeah. Fire away.
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#2
intro/verse/chorus was good but kind of generic. i like the bit starting at bar thirtyeight, sounds epic and evil. the tempo change didnt flow that well in my opinion.i like the chord progession after it though. the riff at sixty eight makes me want to kill something, its so evil. the acoustic bit after it sounds great. piano bit was lovely yet again generic. tempo change and riff at onetwenty was great. all in all its a good song exept some bits sound generic. c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=14700086
#3
Everything flowed great, but seems like back ground music for like a show.
bars 41-50 ( I kinda wish you would keep that nice sound going...) Then you have this empty bar ? kinda throws me off. at bar 80 theres this awesome riff that blends in with everything, Witch is phenomenal! The piano sounds great at 94 but if the piano was capo-ed at the 12th fret it would sound better as it stands out more... 120-130 is cool very dark and eerie... Theres alot of mixed feelings in this song, What i mean by that is you kinda go into evil,dark,eerie, then you go to glad angry and mad . Great show thow 8/10 crit my acoustic song please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=858415
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