#1
This is stuff for my Death Metal / Melodic Metal group. I will probably get alot of hate but it's fine . It's hard to picture the seriousness of the tone when you're just reading the text alone as you can amagine. The band name is Bloody Comfort if anyone is wondering. You can expect some vids I'd say by mid summer.


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test of rewardence, ban your enemy from the future mornings
tragical death tones, maniacal saws grinding in your breast bones..

those that crashed in your presence, know death is an essance
no more blessings, remove the mans skin within seconds..

evil exists regardless of light, it just hardened the fight
only the strong can thrive, the weak lay nible, end their live.


flesh of the torso rains through dirt
to regrow the violence and make you hurt
flesh of the torso rains through dirt
to regrow the violence and make you hurt

superior beings so they claim, silent child, now take aim.
fooling us to bow in vain, time to give the coward pain..

pull their nails, AHH, rip their skin
now they'd wish to admit their sin.

trust doesn't exist, you're alone in this,
but the reaper is comming to own his gift.


flesh of the torso rains through dirt
to regrow the violence and make you hurt
flesh of the torso rains through dirt
to regrow the violence and make you hurt

hide your kids, hide your wife.

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I'd rather kill myself than commit suicide.


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#3
Im not a huge metal fan, but I tried to be unbiased while reading your work. One thing that strikes me is the morbid atmosphere. In my mind, the song seems to deal with atonement, or maybe paying the toll in the afterlife for not repenting for ones sins (obviously this could be incorrect)? Nice work.
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#4
I liked the song, but the title seems like something a comedian would come up with if he was mocking Death Metal.
#7
Thanks for the feed guys, I can rate some of your stuff for ya in a bit np. Yeah like I said, it does seem rather funny to read lyrics like this without hearing the actual seriousness in the vocalist's tone.

Justin your theory is right on the dot, i was working off of that thought since the beginning.
hide your kids, hide your wife.

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