#1
Something I made just 3 days ago, I was inspired by "To Zanarkand" To make some slower music, and this is what it turned out like, I wrote it for Tini, one of my best female friends. C4C, and have a nice listening.

Attachments:
Luminescent End.zip
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.

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Last edited by Madzää at Jun 11, 2008,
#4
i really liked that.

nice and calm.

it kind of reminds me of an acoustic song that i wrote a little while back 0.o


Anyway, i felt that after the scond repeat you should have expanded it a bit more. maybe take a bit more of a dramatic turn (?)

i also felt that it needed a real ending. the fade worked ok, but it felt like it needed more of a definate ending.

Just my opinions, but the song is well done as is.
8/10
#6
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In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.

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Banned for being the coolest April 08'er on UG.


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#9
wow

i could really hear the "to zanarkand" in that
damnit, now i have to play ffx again

but you made it your own, very well
however you should add some tracks like a sympony in the background, make more like the version played by orchestras and not the gp tabs

overall though the track is a solid 9/10 work i must say
just finish it up with some nice additives and itll be a 10 easily

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#10
Overall very pretty piece, I can see it being made out of the heart.

Very emotional, and pretty as I said. In other words (or numbers):

10/10.

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#11
I feel the conection between this song and "To Zanarkand", maybe because "TZ" is in Eminor and your song in Emaj...

Sounds pretty nice, although the rhythm in some parts was a little too irregular, and kind of off, but maybe it is because of midi...
What this piece really needs is to define the voices a little bit more, and regulate the intensity of the notes...
I know, it would be a long work, but definately worth it. If you already gave it that, then great

Maybe add an alternate ending to it, since it feels repetitive after a while..

good song nevertheless 9/10

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#12
amazing piece, loved it

but yea, as said before, maybe expand it a little after the 2nd repeat

also, i think maybe a bit of string backing, and maybe a very subtle beat behind it would work wonders

9/10 =]

crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=858703
Last edited by TeraBite at Jun 12, 2008,