#1
i wonder what it's like
to push your fears aside
let the ember burn red
as you fight this fight

the feeling that you get
rush of blood to your head
your nerves on thin ice
the feelings just divine

my common sense is failing
to make something of this
can't comprehend it
i'm bearing no weight unless

i find that hidden message
its down deeper than it appears
to make something of this
after all of these years
because i'm feeling just cozy
where i'm standing in line
but i would cut ahead
if it would buy me more time

breathe in, breathe out
take some time to plan this out
#2
Quote by JordanRRR
as you fight this fight


That must not happen , I think you should change that ,it doesn't good at all to me .
Maybe to: "Fight this battle".

I liked the rest though, you did a good job.


Crit mine? "Underneath the Street"? or "Submerged"? (Links in my sig)

Again, Great job
#3
Quote by O-52-A-50-R
That must not happen , I think you should change that ,it doesn't good at all to me .
Maybe to: "Fight this battle".

I liked the rest though, you did a good job.


Crit mine? "Underneath the Street"? or "Submerged"? (Links in my sig)

Again, Great job

thanks for the crit yeah it was the first song i wrote so i appreciate it.. i'll take a look at yours.