#1
I cut the original down to make it more interesting (there's alot of repeats in the original).

This took me 3hr to learn and record. I would have done a better job but my injured myself during the session.

After I had finished the last drop d metal riffs I realized I couldn't move my left index finger very well. Turns out the fleshy stuff between the first and second knuckle was nearly swollen to twice the size of my middle finger (not a full double but close enough!). Anyway I got an appointment with local doc, and he said I may have damaged the tendon or slightly ripped the muscle in my finger.

Anyway, I finished mixxing all the tracks together this morning, and I realized that the acoustic breakdown sucks without the voices. So I did my own THREE finger overlay solo (after two ibuprofens).

Enjoy!

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#2
Sounds very nice, you should work on your timing though (not only in this song but also a few others on your profile). A little more practice should do .
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#3
good, but like the other guy said....work on your timing.
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#4
Hey thanks for the advice. I'll try to pay more attention when I record the next song. It's just that I have to do these one track at a time.

Put the cd in. Play with it, repeat the song, play the next guitar, repeat song, play the next guitar....
#5
the main riff sounds brilliant, not too sure about the break though, sounds out
#6
Sounds out?

I recorded myself playing it once. Then mixxed that to the left channel and added a chorus filter. After that I played it again and left it clean. Then mixxed it to the right channel. Then added the improv solo to the right channel as well.

I guess the chorus could have thrown the timing off with all that reverb and stuff

-Dj
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