#2
Nicely played! Some of your bends felt a little rushed, try to really listen to them and hear exactly what note you're bending to.

Other than that it's all very good! Looks like you have a good picking motion in your right hand too.
#3
Not bad for only a few months of practice! Quite good actually! A few (minor) remarks: Don't rush it, you have some rythm problems now and then. Your ears need a little more practice, your bends are not always very accurate. Tone-wise: try adding some delay...

Keep up the good work!

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Thanks!
#4
Wow man, this was pretty good, especially if you have only been playing a few months. You will be great soon enough. The tone was really high and trebly, but other than that, the playing was pretty good, a little slow in some spots, but other than that it was good. keep it up!