#1
it's called Lover, Lover from my forthcoming self made album (made just for the aim of achieving something) any crits would be nice, tell me what u like what u don't like

Im an emotionles SOB so u can say wotever u want about it and i promise ill crit any song u want in return

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#2
sounds like willy manson corssed with nirvana. Id say raise the overall level of the track just so its loud enough. Also drums are always a nice addon. Belive me i know how hard drums are to add into a song, especially after its already all there set out and recorded b ut trust me some light precussion would really add to it. Infact i think some piano at around 5.22 would sounds great, but thats just me. Thats all i can say really. good luck.
#4
I agree with Faux, a lot of it sounds like smashing pumpkins. I would raise the vocals a little bit in the mix and lower the electric guitar. The song has a good vibe to it, i almost want it to go into a crunch part later on. Like a song that continually grows, reaches a climax, and then fades away, or something along those lines. Like i said, it's hard to distinguish the vocals, but overall it has a nice vibe to it.

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#5
Quote by guitarsmith02
I agree with Faux, a lot of it sounds like smashing pumpkins. I would raise the vocals a little bit in the mix and lower the electric guitar. The song has a good vibe to it, i almost want it to go into a crunch part later on. Like a song that continually grows, reaches a climax, and then fades away, or something along those lines.


i orginallyactually planed to bring in crunch guitar as i originally wanted to play it on electric, but i think acoustic guitar suits the mood more and i kinda like holding the song in the sort of suspensful place it's meant to sit, atleast i hope it does that


Quote by James_Het_Rules
its alot like nirvana in a way. The guitar tone is pretty good, the only thing i didn't like was the little squeaks you get playing an acoustic, i know how hard it is not to get those stupid squeals, but that's really the only thing that i could pick out that was negative,


i tried my best to remove the acoustic white noise but it's the worst acoustic in the world plus don't those squeeks and slides give the song a homier feel?

also i can't work out hw it soudns like the pumpkins, they are my favourite band but i can't see the similaritie... oh well

thansk for teh reviews guys
#6
It's pretty good man. I thought the intro could have been a little more interesting (just one note for like 30 seconds lol). It's very calm and relaxing. I liked the multiple vocals and when the second guitar comes in.

gj 8/10
#7
cool song. simple and mellow, but i the instruments work great together. one thing though, and it's been said before, but u should probably turn up the vocals a little. other than that good tune.



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