#6
theyre all pretty bad, and i would put alot of money on safe in the knowledge you cant play them all. im all for dissonance but those were just plain messy randomness
#9
Wow, these are heavy as fook!!!! Not really that much into majorly heavy metal tbh, but I can see that these are pretty good examples of it. The playing's really technical, if you could pull these off live you're insane! Anyway yeah overall, had a listen to them all and general impression was that although not really my style, some pretty good writing there

Crit ours? You'll probably hate it, but musically? Lol, cheers
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=883338
#10
haha i love this is really technical brutal and heavy, if you can actualy play this you win and the writing is quality i like it a lot!
and thanks for the crit on mine
#11
I'm afraid this was far too dissonant, and random for me to actually crit honestly since I don' like this kind of music. However, I can tell you that you need to work on your transitions. Again, maybe that's the point and I just can't understand this type of music at all. I'm afraid I didn't like the songs very much, sorry.
#12
Quote by Ceresz
I'm afraid this was far too dissonant, and random for me to actually crit honestly since I don' like this kind of music. However, I can tell you that you need to work on your transitions. Again, maybe that's the point and I just can't understand this type of music at all. I'm afraid I didn't like the songs very much, sorry.

Yeah, im not very good on transitioning...