#1
On my profile: Hemi song 2 http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Bostonrocks/music/

Hope you guys like this one. I recorded with my rockman soloist straight to my laptop. The drums are mixcraft (great program btw) I haven't completley got my mastering process down yet but I will.

This is a really Classic 80s hair metal song I was going for a Van halen whitecross kinda sound I think I did okay but not perfect.
Lemme know what you think

btw I know my arpeggios are just a tad off time in the begging of the solo.

as always Crit for crit
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Last edited by Bostonrocks at Jun 12, 2008,
#2
I really like the intro, great progression. I would probably reduce some of the highs slightly on the first gutiar tho--but that's just based on my taste. This song is crying for some vocals, they could really bring it to a new level.

The solo is sick, seriously I really like what I hear. Very good guitar tone as well.


btw, let me say thanks for the feedback on my song.
#3
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I really like the intro, great progression. I would probably reduce some of the highs slightly on the first gutiar tho--but that's just based on my taste. This song is crying for some vocals, they could really bring it to a new level.

The solo is sick, seriously I really like what I hear. Very good guitar tone as well.


btw, let me say thanks for the feedback on my song.



No problem I actually really liked your song Just needs some work.

and I can't sing or it would have some
the solo could of been even better but I don't have a guitar with a Floyd Rose. It was all done with a modded strat with a normal trem
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#4
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before I say anything thanks for the critic of my song

what can i say to me it was the same progression over and over and over and over and over and over and the acoustic arpeggios at the beginning are extremely unoriginal and the solo was good but then again it was very unoriginal too.

P.S dont take it personally



Np you did a good job

and thats ok if you don't like it you don't like it. thanks for the crit though.
Quote by gregs1020
Brett has been saving for a splawn for 4 years
countries have been toppled in the time it's taking, revolutions won got a black pres

yawn


Quote by bubb_tubbs
When he finally gets one it'll probably be televised like the Berlin Wall coming down.
The end of an era
#6
Criting whilst I listen. I like the rawness of the sound, and if it had some lyrics over it, it would be complete. But it's kinda boring without lyrics, ya know? The acoustic kinda sounded dissonant at at least one spot, but it was hardly noticeable. Like I said this would be pretty cool with some nice lyrics over it (maybe some really dark ones) over it.

As far as the tone, I liked it quite a bit. Very 80's retro, kinda like a Quiet Riot tone.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=880981

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=880907

Especially this one?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=881754
#7
Nice.
Yours sincerely,

bobwentpop, UG's favourite spontaneous combustion victim.