#1
I have no idea where to go with this doomy piece I've been writing with my bassist.

Help, any?
Attachments:
Doomy Thing.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#2
What you have so far is pretty cool. What sounds like it would go well afterwards would be to let the open powerchord on the E string ring for a full bar, then blast into some fast, brutal, and possibly melodic riffage, then alternate back to the slow doomy riffage. Then perhaps an atmospheric-ish acoustic + bass break.

That, or a solo over the current riffs.

Hopefully that helped. If not, oh well.
#3
Hmm, I'll see what I get tomorrow and re-post this.

Thanks for teh helpz.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#4
All right, the riffs and song reached a logical conclusion at around 4 minutes so how do you think it ended up, and what I should change if anything?

By the way, it's meant to NOT have a solo so don't suggest that
Attachments:
Doomy Thing Finished.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#6
Powertab.
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#8
you'd get way more crits if you supplied a tab. I know that I personally haven't even listened to your song for the single reason that it's a midi. if you had a tab, I'd give you a crit.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
#9
Quote by Jonathan Trejo
hmmm are u paranoid someone might steal it ?


No, so here y'all go.
Attachments:
Doomy Thing Tab.zip
R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory