Just a quick on the spot poem of sorts... I don't mind giving you some feedback if you leave some suggestions.

I’d love to write you a song
To sing you a tune
To play out a chord
That could embody you

But you’re too far beyond
Any sweet melody
I could never sing
In your kind of key

So your heart remains
High up on a shelf
Just out of reach
As you keep to yourself

I wish you'd open your eyes
So you could see
What I see every time
You stare back at me
Last edited by alteemsma at Jun 13, 2008,