#1
If Only You Could See

I open my mouth to a bitter taste
A constant slur of nuclear waste
Drink and drunk from days emblazed
Memories of you will soon be erased
I’ve formed a plot to restrain the false
An army of power and sold revolt
Return to the earth from which we came
To come back stronger and break remains
This adamant time is dawning soon
The moonless sky is breeding room
Space is the only thing we’ll need
For that respect we’ll soon precede

Ashes to ashes the burning storm
Demeaning the dreams and the hearts that we’ve worn
Take down the surface to break down the core
From human desire, “we want more!”
Hated and haters are joined tonight
Because pathways are burning in aid of this fight
Survival is instinct but now its disease
Don’t ****ing push us; you have what we need

Watch it all come down
Take the world away
Don’t you tell me you never knew?
If only you could see

Deciding to change all that is now
But none of you bastards seem to know how
I’ll sing you to sleep with the voice you can’t stand
When there’s no one else left to take hold of your hand
The time has come we’ve got no choice
And trust me on this we’ll find a voice
The winds hit us hard and break down our signs
Now it is clear that this is our time

Watch it all come down
Take the world away
Don’t you tell me you never knew?
If only you could see
Watch it all come down
Take the world away
Don’t you tell me you never knew?
If only you could see

Our Last Song

Sirens sound and my ears bleed
For all the souls still un-freed
This turn is over I know its mine
The burning sun fades from the sky
Honestly I have to say
It comes forward, the darkest day
My dreams have died in this dismay

Tearing down the only wall (Don’t forget to scream my name)
To watch the greatest temple fall (Now it’s over)
Failing stars and breaking lights (Don’t forget to scream my name)
Dropping dead from endless fights (Once it’s over)

I taste the pain from out my eyes
To watch the world meet demise
Broken hearts beneath my feet
Treaded down where both men meet
I shed a tear for every death
The world is taking its last breath
We must be the last one’s left

Don’t forget to scream my name
Now it’s over
Don’t forget to scream my name
Once it’s over

Tearing down the only wall (Don’t forget to scream my name)
To watch the greatest temple fall (Now it’s over)
Failing stars and breaking lights (Don’t forget to scream my name)
Dropping dead from endless fights (Once it’s over)

Tearing down the only wall (Don’t forget to scream my name)
To watch the greatest temple fall (Now it’s over)
Failing stars and breaking lights (Don’t forget to scream my name)
Dropping dead from endless fights (Once it’s over)

Don’t forget to scream my name

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Written In Braille

Don’t you forget you promised me?
The only dream I’ve ever had time to dream
The sweetest gleam of being me

And don’t you forget you promised me?
The marriage of us and screeching ache to be
The only thing I see

Let’s come together unify
The gravity we’ll defy
If you let me live our lives
Sometime soon you’ll have to see
Passed your ****ed up theory
Just let me hold you into glee

Telling jokes are the only token I will remember
From the inferno to the ember
My love once burned for you
Standing on stained glass
Waiting for the break
A fragile picture broken in the wake of noon

Don’t you forget you nurtured me?
Into the man of self belief
From scratch of slave I redeemed

And don’t you forget you nurtured me?
Into the sweetest cane of seed
From shrubs to garnered tree

Let’s come together unify
The echo of our cry
If only we saw passed our eyes
Sometimes soon you’ll have to see
The miasma of the free
Is really a prison in which we scream?

Screaming jokes are the only sound in here
From the dead to the dear
My love once leered (Into your eyes)
Standing on eth surface
Of this breaking doorway
Why can’t you try catching this?

Now I see! Now I See! NOW I SEE!

If only life was written down in Braille
Than maybe we’d understand
Would we fall down and still fail?
Or maybe we’d stand a chance
I’m spraying you with all the truth
Yet you say you still need proof
WHAT ELSE IS THERE TO SEE?

Don’t you forget who I am to you?
The dribble still breathing into this tube
The potential an failure too

Don’t you forget who I am to you?
The son of a Goddess dressed in blue
The scathing remains of solitude

Let’s come together, unify
Celebrate the funeral of lies
If only he’d not found demise
Sometime soon you’ll have to see
Passed little letters and **** on TV
We wanted a fortune if only to bleed

Bleeding lies and staining beds
From perfect blues to darkened reds
My love is lost and in your chest
Standing on my grave
Back to the work of slave
Why don’t you open your eyes?

Why don’t you open your eyes?

Analogies

We’re pushing down the river of the cubicles you know
But there’s something in the way and it’s fighting against the hull
We’re treading in the water of the accidental rain
But no matter the trauma there is nothing quite like pain
Every heart beats second and the adrenaline just pumps
As we scrape against the hard river banks and other shallow bumps
The sight of you in disparity almost makes my heart glow
But jealousy right now ain’t gonna keep this boat afloat

Bring me sunshine and my heart line
If you scream for me
Push your fashion, inner passion
String it up for me

Weather seems to curse us now by shaking us inside
And the secrets we had to keep we know we just can’t hide
Some of us start telling tales of families and wives
And I just can’t help but stare right into your eyes
Sun seems so far away but I can see you shine
The other’s they’re crying now but I’ll fight till you’re mine
And I’ll be the hero of the day swim beneath the safe
I’ll clog the arteries if you survive the waves

Analogies don’t grow on trees
So I’ll be thinking through
Break this line for what is mine
And then I’ll find the truth

So the calm as come quickly and I whisper when we’re close
“I know we’ve been so far apart but without you I can’t cope”
You smile and you hold my hands and murmur out a saying
“You’re my sunshine, baby, and I know he’s up there praying”
And suddenly some water comes crushing into us
We hold together, and lungs fill with the water we both lust

Bring me sunshine and my heart line
If you scream for me
Push your fashion, inner passion
String it up for me
Analogies don’t grow on trees
So I’ll be thinking through
Break this line for what is mine
And then I’ll find the truth

We Can Save The Word (It's All Over)

Trust for me I can’t believe
The father’s sons they cannot breathe
Struggles pass the roads they weave
It’s ‘bout time that we retrieve
Our entireties are growing over time
This ego of ours is breaking its spine
Trouble will break as demons let loose
When the king of all forgets his use (Hangs his noose!)

If we could start again I think we’d do it all over
The blood is running thin as the games finally over
Is this what we really want? A life that amounts to nil
This is the end of this dying land why can’t time stand still?


Keep drilling down into a barren land
Keep pumping out her blood on demand
Cut down the trees that cannot stand
The world unites under tragic brands
Don’t bite into this apple
Do not pray at your local chapel
It’s time to use your voice and stand your ground
Make your complaint their last sound! (Fall and Drowned)

If we could start again I think we’d do it all over
The blood is running thin as the games finally over
Is this what we really want? A life that amounts to nil
This is the end of this dying land why can’t time stand still?

God can’t save us now the surface breaks too thin
We can’t help ourselves we’ve got nothing within
Maybe we’re powerless in which case let’s give in
But as with everything we can change the world
People are perfect beings, we can change the world

If we could start again I think we’d do it all over
The blood is running thin as the games finally over
Is this what we really want? A life that amounts to nil
This is the end of this dying land why can’t time stand still?

If we could start again I think we’d do it all over (It’s all over)
The blood is running thin as the games finally over (It’s all over)
Is this what we really want? A life that amounts to nil (It’s all over)
This is the end of this dying land why can’t time stand still? (It’s all over)

Fracture
People change their mind
This world is sublime
Take me away to a further place from here
Hold me and say, that this world won’t disappear
Time will never tell us. What it means
What it means, to be alive with this cancer
You wish me to believe passed the eyes that we once wore
Now it’s torn apart, there’s no reason too let go
Dreams will always be with us when we sleep
No one can take our minds, they’re our own
But our lives can be taken away
Martyrs will continue to fall
Like a cycle of rain in the sky
But we’ll eventually all die
And these scars offer no answers
Like those dreams that we once had
Forget it, this fracture’s in my head.

I apologize if this is too much at once, and i Thank you if you've taken teh time to rea dthrough these and pass on your advice, as a growing songwriter it would be very helpful how I can tame my words. Thanks again!
#2
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i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#3
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jesus calm down man who cares... suck off ug why dont ya... ANYWAYS man i thought they were pretty good.. gluck
#4
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jesus calm down man who cares... suck off ug why dont ya... ANYWAYS man i thought they were pretty good.. gluck
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EDIT response to post below:
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u send me a dirty letter? cant wait
Me? Oh, heavens, no!
I don't have your e-mail address. And it won't be a dirty letter. It'll be a love letter!


I know the suspense will probably be getting to you at this point,
so I'll give you a preview. If you get one, it will look a lot like this:



Enjoy!
Meadows
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I release my inner liberal every morning when I take a shit.
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I wont be like those jerks who dedicate their beliefs to logic and reaosn.
Last edited by SomeoneYouKnew at Jun 14, 2008,
#5
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u send me a dirty letter? cant wait
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#6
Thats ****ing sick, wow, but a tip, if its for a metal kind of song... Rhyming is pretty lame for metal...
#7
Quote by SomeoneYouKnew
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be sure to check your e-mail.

EDIT response to post below:
Me? Oh, heavens, no!
I don't have your e-mail address. And it won't be a dirty letter. It'll be a love letter!


I know the suspense will probably be getting to you at this point,
so I'll give you a preview. If you get one, it will look a lot like this:



Enjoy!


lol.. umm wow your cool...