#1
http://youtube.com/watch?v=cXURb7iw5Lw

My band and I just wrote this song earlier today.. I'm the singer/rhythm guitarist... i'm using a crappy old ibanez starter guitar because I broke a string on my Gibson Les Paul an hour into our practice..

let me know what you think...

PS - i know the solo at the end doesn't sound too great, but that's because he was still figuring out what he was gonna play.

Thanks in advance
#2
good stuff, but i wish i could hear your voice more clearly dude... i like the lead guitar hook... really cool and melodic. the recording quality really needs work- maybe you can get the tape-outs from the mixer and plug it into a recording device for an ipod, this way you get a clean take? i do that all the time from my live shows.
speaking of which, check out my recent live perf and crit if you will:
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=884102