#2
if it's any consolation, I probably would've lost to that

but I really liked it. I expected more from the chorus. It really didn't act as a climax to the song and it just really seemed weak. solo could use some work too. I feel like you should put more emphasis on the little riff in the first couple measures of the solo. use that as sort of a bass for the entire solo.

other than that, it was really enjoyable. I love hearing your songs
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...