crit. and all that jazz

What is my world?
its open and shut
case closed, thirty years ago.
but its new case
fresh blood,
killer on the loose.

Where do I live?
rich house
king of my castle
but ghetto
low class
rat in the street

What do I see?
children playing
horses trotting
people laughing
but babies dying
guns are firing
despair is the mood

Who am I?
Abe Lincoln
John Stewart
a grocery clerk
but Charles Manson
Son of Sam

happy sad
good bad
young old
i dont know
im confused
what is this
I am falling
into the abyss
Last edited by wingederaser94 at Jun 15, 2008,