#1
Remember yesterday
For all that’s worth
Look at the joy
Whether you’re up or you’re down
Remember the songs
We used to sing
Peace and pretty things

Day by day
Find a way
Make the best of everything
Day by day

Let the time
You have shine
See the good
Hear the laughs
Sunny skies and lullabies
Just close your eyes
Let clouds roll by

Day by day
Find a way
Make the best of everything
Day by day
#2
Hey thanks for the feedback!

I like this one; it reminds me of watching clouds in the summertime or something like that. It's really nice and not-rushed in my head. The lyrics are kind of catchy too!

Keep up the good work.
#3
I like this alot. It's not too wordy or descriptive but thats not a bad thing at all. It's very simple and i imagine it going along with just a guitar or piano accompaniment. Simple lyrics and simple arrangements sometimes make the best songs. Crit my lyrics if you'd like. The song is called Our Duty
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#4
Quote by Gregoriose
Remember yesterday
For all that’s worth
Look at the joy
Whether you’re up or you’re down
Remember the songs
We used to sing
Peace and pretty things
(Normally, I would advise against the use of 'things', but you used it nicely)

Day by day
Find a way
(Good rhyme)
Make the best of everything
Day by day

Let the time
You have shine
See the good
Hear the laughs
Sunny skies and lullabies
Just close your eyes
Let clouds roll by
(This whole stanza was very catchy. I caught myself singing it in my head)

Day by day
Find a way
Make the best of everything
Day by day


I like these lyrics a lot. It's something that most (if not all) people can relate to. I really like your style as well.

Thanks for the crit, btw.
It all makes sense
We're capable of beauty
Through sounds that make on cringe
The dogs only hear us now