OK well this is a song i wrote a while back...its only about 3 minutes long...Its still needs a lot of chages but I tought it would be cool to hear other peoples opinions

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[Edit]i've made a longer outro..I need to turn down the acoustic guitar in the outro but i can 't bothered right now cause i'm going to bed
Melodic DM(2).zip
Last edited by Elegies at Jun 15, 2008,
Sounds really good to me, the riffs are catchy and i can hear the Arch Enemy inspiration, but some parts are a little bit repetative. Overall a good song
Dude, I love it. I've got a lot of AE inspired melod. death metal, you nailed it dude good job.

you got an email address or something so we can share ideas?