#1
Thought up a little song earlier today.

i have the intro and the verses but im not sure what i should do for a chorus?


any ideas

oh and any crit is much appreciated
Attachments:
untitledgp5.zip
Last edited by dfc_jebus at Jun 16, 2008,
#2
Well, it sounds alright. Really, it makes me think I'm at a funeral. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but that is sure how I perceived it. Maybe for the chorus, you should switch to distorted guitars and start cranking out power chords and harmonies.

It's pretty nice, though.


Crit mine?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=883571
It all makes sense
We're capable of beauty
Through sounds that make on cringe
The dogs only hear us now

#3
haha, i dont really know what kinda feel i was giving it, i just based it off the intro riff.

hmm ill try that, hopefully when i have enough money for a synth and a audio interface i can record it down.


oh and i tried checking out your stuff but the file isnt there.