#1
This is kind of a Seether influenced song with quite a melodic verse. Just give me your feedback.

Life is Dead
Death marches on
Taking souls
Like a wars going strong

Tell me when
This plague will end
Tell me when
My soul will mend

I look across the sea and find a distant shore
I search among the waves for something slightly more
Can you tell me what I'm looking for?
I can't tell myself

All I see
On the ground
Are black coffins
Being taken down

Life is black
All light is gone
Souls are taken
Death marches on

I look across the sea and find a distant shore
I search among the waves for something slightly more
Can you tell me what I'm looking for?
I can't tell myself


REDBIRD
#2
By the way, The verse is the march bit, and the chorus goes into a loud melodic bit. The verses have almost monotonous vocals.

P.S it is not quite finished