#1
Joke's on Me


Who the hell decided that chickens couldn't fly?
That pedgeons were a nuisance and dodo's had to die?
We're all still fading away
But not today

(chorus)
Life is nothing but a joke
At least that's the filthy rumour
So who is up there laughing at me?
God has a sick scence of humor
Joke's on me

Who the hell decided that I would be like this?
An obsessive contradiciton, a compulsive pessimist
What's wrong? we're all dying anyway
But not today

(chorus)

Let's go somewhere
I don't know and I really don't care
What's wrong? Don't know
I can't remember why it's going so slow
One day I think I'll change my mind
But not today

(chorus)
I'd rather be hated for who I am, then loved for who I am not
-Kurt Cobain
#2
not bad, could use some revising but a very good start
When I was in highschool 4 or 5 years ago my history teacher crapped herself (she had a problem, she was wearing dippers and all that but damn it was retarded and funny as hell).

You could hear the farts all over the classroom, lol.
#4
i like the concept and it started out strong
and there is nothing wrong with sounding like depeche mode
#5
hi brandoni16,

this thread was started not quite 3 full days after the first of two you already posted.
you can only have 2 threads in 6 full days.
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